dude thats a dope predrop vocal but id leave it out of that first drop. the bass sounds sick af but that vocal just covers it up
yeah i feel you! i usually wont put this much thought into someone elses track unless i think its gonna sound super sick when its done
it could somewhat play the same rythm as your predrop vocal, and then where it says "mistaken" just hold that last note out the rest of the bar. maybe automate the lfo or some shit. idk thats just my opinion lol