So, the transients of the bass when that strong one starts up, might be a tiny bit too strong, but in the context of the other synths, it sounds just OK. The structure of the track, ,mostly the drums, is unconsistant, however I see that that was your original aim and it creates a nicer, more experimental atmo. In a lot of EDM there's more consistant and repetitive beat. Overall good track, and I don't have any more crit.