Aight this kinda hit now
Lyrics
Verse 1
Yo, I’m from the D, where the blocks stay gritty,
Caddies on dubs cruisin' through the Motor City.
Paint drippin' wet like the Belle Isle breeze,
Wrist froze colder than a Michigan freeze.
Hustle in my veins, yeah, I’m built like that,
Chasin' cheddar every day, gotta stack that pack.
Ain't no cap, dawg, I was raised in the struggle,
Turned my pain into muscle, now my chips do the shuffle.
Chorus
This Detroit grind, man, it’s all I know,
From the 8 Mile line to the downtown glow.
Keep the game tight, yeah, we move real low,
While the speakers in the trunk let the bassline blow.
Verse 2
Big whip rollin’, cruisin’ down the block,
Old heads posted up, still watchin' the clock.
Every dollar counts, gotta get it for real,
Hustlin’ hard just to cop that meal.
Pockets growin' slow, but I’m steady on the grind,
Keep my crew solid, leave the fake ones behind.
D-town pride, yeah, it’s tatted in my soul,
We shine through the struggle, turn the pain into gold.
Outro
Yeah, it’s Motor City made, hustle in my genes,
From the red bricks to the riverside scenes.
Keep your head on a swivel, that’s just how we play,
And if you ain’t from the D, better stay in your lane.
Chorus
This Detroit grind, man, it’s all I know,
From the 8 Mile line to the downtown glow.
Keep the game tight, yeah, we move real low,
While the speakers in the trunk let the bassline blow.
Verse 2
Big whip rollin’, cruisin’ down the block,
Old heads posted up, still watchin' the clock.
Every dollar counts, gotta get it for real,
Hustlin’ hard just to cop that meal.
Pockets growin' slow, but I’m steady on the grind,
Keep my crew solid, leave the fake ones behind.
D-town pride, yeah, it’s tatted in my soul,
We shine through the struggle, turn the pain into gold.
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honestly not bad at all, better than what I can do haha
Try to mix ur vocals better tho, but remember, it all starts with recording so maybe get a better mic too :)
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XD
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OHHH ye that might be the problem more than the mixing lmao
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oh that might be it, cuz i just finished remixing my vocals again this is like the 4th time, this is the best one but you might be right about the mic im only using 7 dollar earbuds to rec LMAO, but im not serious about it im just having fun.
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kinda sound like juice wrld
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bells repetive
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the beat is tight, but yeah what they said abt the vocals
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damn sir u cooked
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decent
like the lyrics
main set back is the vocals quality
a solid beat to go along with it.
not bad 👍
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Not bad my boi filoy
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if I'm honest, its pretty good, definitely get rid of the reverb on the vocals, let them vocals ring, if there yours, you have a lot of potential, so show it in your music, I can tell you have a talent, but you need to let the vocals ring without the reverb, I suggest use the preset on Bandlab Clean Rap.
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i think its alright, its just the beat is kinda basic and repetitive, needs a bit of punch and variety
needs a good, bouncy 808 imo
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this goes hard :>
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bro the next prodigy
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damn this is lit
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do some research on vocal mastering
also make sure there are distinguishing features to the track,
I feel like this would benefit from adding and removing drums and melody and bassline at least
you should give the vocals more breathing room too.
the best advice I can tell you is pt more variety
