I can't say it sounds bad, except maybe the piano keys at the end, which are just a bit too flat. But there really isn't much to critique here, this whole track is essentially that pitched down piano loop with a kick drum added on top. The synthesizers don't bite my man, I can only recommend spending some more time experimenting with creating your own sound and composition.
@naut
The kicks in the beginning were suspposrd to be like a heartbeat, and also i done all i can with the piano part idk what i can do with those to make it better sense we dont have actual piano on At. I all ready tried making mu own compostiton but its hard yo make a beat with it