first selfmade melody ive ever made here used into a beat

looking to improve

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  • wow this is good

    shouldve eqd lmfao

  • Really nice melodies. The sound is a bit over the top on my headphones

  • how did this not chart lmao

  • one of the best things ive heard on this site ever, i beg you extend this

    • Dude DO IT

      This is really good and could also be potential for at

    • really? it’s good but it’s not like amazing or anything

      and yeah it was kinda a test since i never made melodies on here and stuff

  • Could you inv me to a copy of this? We wont publish it or anything, but I want to show you some of the things of what I said on your other track. I want to show you how to get this as clean as fucking possible. And maybe you could implement what I'm going to show you into your other drafts. When/if you do inv me, I will either talk in the chat, and walk you every step of the way. I will explain why, how and what I would do. I'm asking this mainly so I can be hands on while teaching lol

    • I've always wondered Abt the period thing...

    • Nah I love how serious you are about getting the sound to be perfectly eqd and stuff. Really shows how skilled and bright you are cuz I never hear artists ever talking about this kinda stuff. Really great

    • Mm hmm client is to gud at gammar

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  • needs to be longer

  • The 808 at 00:13 is colliding with the regular sub bass. So I think you should roll it off with an EQ to wherever you see it spikes on the premaster settings. You wanna take away the frequencies that are really harsh basically.

    • The hi-hats sound good too, but I think taking some of the high piercing frequencies would be good to do

    • Give the arps more high end too. I think you could give it more highs

    • and yes ty for the eq tips

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  • nice

  • I just realized how good this is oml

  • damn im proud of this lool

    i like how it turned out

    • I knew it

    • cuz he makes amazing mels as well and i was like "what if i made one"

  • this is disgusting

    respectfully

  • loving the cover too

  • Ahhh the twinkley virtual melody heehee