ofc u have a very simplistic setup here but I think that's making the lack of diversity of synths stand out too much. you got a lot of squarey harsh sounds building up, bringing down the emotional potential imo. just if stuff was softer &/ more sonically varied then this would feel more stronk
v nice chordal movements u have a v good ear for true harmonic progression.
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the sudden loss of the chords seems a bit sudden for my taste. maybe u can fade them out or add something idk. fantastic work