I'm sorry, but I really don't feel like there is any coherence to this song at all. The melodies and drums really don't go together that well. My favorite part is probably around
1:00
, you get some interesting sounds there. - Rick
Agree with Inavon, the beat is kind of against the melody that starts out. Something slower like a basic rock drum pattern with lowered bpm might do the trick, some of the sounds could also use a bit of effect spicing.