Love the name! I think the you balanced the medium and high frequences quite well but I'd prefer some deepness or a more prominent bass from
02:14
. I really like the synth beginning at
01:00
before the switch-up also. I'm quite clueless on whatever the f a "nonatomic range" is so ig I could just say well done, :)
Comme feedback je te conseillerais d'expérimenter avec plusieurs couches de son pour donner un peu plus de corps à la chanson. But again all of this can remain subjective to each person's individual tastes :)