for me this is way too simple and idk ... weird lol, i mean the way the vocals were used and abused repeatedly, the wobbles were nice and the sub is cool, definitely you got a little more original in this one
I would've thought that your would've made your own melody and percussion, but you did use a synth and I'm pretty proud. The structure of this song is kind of repetitive and held out, but not bad. The intro is a little too long to me. The vocals could've used some delay effects to add some flair to this song. But keep improving. I like this. Also, try to make your own beats as well. AT has a whole bunch of nice one shots for you to make a nice beat. But nice work.