I like the melody here, but that sound at
1:14
is a bit weird to me and I think it clashes with the other synth at
1:36
. But this is definitely the best I've heard from you. :)
And less good: The most annoying thing with this track is that you used so much compression, which made the drums almost disappear at some moments, so I would like to reduce the average compression in this track. You should put the compression at the high resonance synths instead. I would also like to get rid of the gap at
4:45
, maybe by linking the parts together in a tasteful way.
I hope you find this helpful somehow. Good work so far! :)
Hello r4c7! Your post on my wall brought me here. Now for the critique:
Good: I like your synth sounds in this track, they are both creative and interesting to listen to. Maybe you could just reduce the resonance of the melodious sounds so we can hear your ideas better.
Yes, I feel a lot more for this, so you may want to watch out. I may give the new version a new name and pic too, so don't be surprised if you hear something similar.
I tried bumping the tempo up to 140, but that seemed too fast. I am definitely going to make a heavier beat listening back to this and ditch the dub-step beat (and the bass wobble), I'm just going to make this full on house.