First track I've ever produced. There are definitely elements that need improving, but there are also a few portions of the song that i'm happy with. I would love constructive criticism, comments, or suggestions! Thanks for listening.
Fantastic! It's rare to see a first track so well constructed. It has a swell plot, and great melody. My only suggestion would be to add some pads. I too have a problem with this, but basically add some synthesizer in the background of your tracks to fill in that blank space and give it more depth. Nothing fancy, just a appropriate and cool sounding background synth, playing one or a few notes, that doesn't detract from the melody.