Very nice ideas here bro, all you have to do is make them work. Like, Ik ur using the method where you pitch a bunch of 808s and shorten them to match and stuff but try using 1 808 and use automation to pitch it so it won't overlap the other ones. I used to do the same thing XD. But gr8 track bro
I like the hi-hats! also nice build but the 808 is not well tuned with the melody. For example @
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it would be a lower key
tuff. sounds you put a lot of work into it, i like it. i feel like the melody is too loud or not properly mixed, dropping a graphical/parametric eq on that and eliminating most of the low/mid end will help the drums not sound so distant, but maybe you wanted it like that idk. drumwork is solid