Thanks Abaddon and Tornsage!! :)
@vhh
i think what is happening is the melody is to high in the mix and the bassline is turned up too high, fighting for attention, i am going to go back in and remaster and throw some more stuff in :P
I see what you mean Uprising, and what happens is i publish thigs before i have completely finished them, it's a bad habit of mine haha, i'll have to work on it in the future, and after listening a few more times, i definitely need to do more bassline work here, and pull the synths down, and add some more things... I really shouldn't have published this one yet :/
i would consider this a Pop Edit mroe then a mix :) a remix to me is more when you take the main elements of the Song Keeping its integrity but making your own song from it :) .. Wonderful edit though :)