Final version, I equed the track and added a bit of compression on the final mix, if you think that some things have to be fix, just tell me, I ain't no masta
What I think this really could use it a new, exciting melody. It needs something to add a little more flare or something. It doesn;t have to be a big massive synth, or even used that often, but I think it needs just a little boost of something exciting in it.
Intro is really good. I think the progression in the beginning could be changed drum-wise. Start with the high hats then incorporate the kick. Unlike Die Servus I dont see a problem with the EQing of the drums, but i am listening on really horrible laptop speakers.
(maybe, I forget the higher one since I just do what sounds better) when you do this it gives it more of a snap to it without it having almost no slap to it.. I like when the chord progression is altered. varitation and change is what makes music interesting. the scratchy voice is soft when it first comes in then later its kicked up in volume. dont know what your doing there but I like that to be the same even if it is variation.
like the decayed melody alot!!! the beat is awesome but I think you shouldve gone for some harder drums. @
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this bas is GREAT great syncopated stuff and frequency variations and dynamics really bring out the electro-ish feel to this simplistic siong. I feel like this harder style should have a harder drum kit or at least be EQed a bit better especially the kick, try a harder one and EQ it mostly in the lower range around 50-65 hz then bring it up around the 6k-7.5khz