Not bad! I think you can do better in terms of originality. I feel like i've head this style too often. If you want to be really breaking borders, start experimenting with different styles. You gotta be unique to be noticed. You've got the ability to make something awesome. Keep it up and Great job. The FX you use ive heard in a lot of other tracks; That flute sound thats in this song is really repetitive. Maybe bringing it up an octave after it repeats will make it give it some variant. GJ man