I like this it's very good. I do think cutting down the volume breaks the mood be cause it's out of nowhere, maybe try to introduce the silence make it part of the rithm, but this is just my opinion, keep up:~)
The agigio really clashed with the small huher. And although the gioopp was very figuyer-y, I think it evened out well with the lokutoorf you added. on that note, the buurx was a nice addition. Maybe add a flipple on the fardipeeper. The use of a toofpooper was ingenuis! di u use two or three?
The drums don't really fit in my opinion, but I know what you were trying to go for. I also feel like the transitions are really rough between sections. That's kinda all I have to say, this is pretty solid. I love that reese, It is in some really sick spots that makes me love it more (
1:20
for example ). This is a weird track, and I love it. I do feel like now that I'm listening again; That some sound design doesn't fit with the others. Other than that, awesome work
I really like the drums rhythm and stereo image from
2:04
onwards. The transition at
2:00
is cool, although the silences are sligthly too bold imo - for example some reverb, subtle pad, noise, crusher's high end freqs or else could line the background and fill the gaps if you see what mean (probably just a matter of taste though). Very nice work :)
Like you could add different pad textures, and a nice arpeggio rhythm that goes down and up on the matrix. Set it to whatever settings. Usually when you change the velocity of the notes though it comes up with pretty wild variations.
just a notify my name is titik, not ti(k)tik- its a common mistake a lot of peeps make so just wanna let you know cause even I freaking goof up on my own name xDDDDDd
but holy christ man this is such a wonderful edit/extension to the original! the freaking dark, somber bass change you did throughout
1:09
was absolutely AMAZING to hear, breathtaking even- and you made the rainstick quieter, which I respect cause It adds that small, but needed tension AAAAAAA
I feel like the drums could use more distortion and punchiness. For example, the kickdrum seems lost where your ambient elements are playing if that makes sense. You should try making the kick more low-endy. The hi-hats are neat. But could be more there. Make sure to EQ them.