Vocals really need some touch-up, they could need a bit more high-end imo. And the lead could be a bit louder, the other elements a slight bit more balance, although I like where you are going with the leveling. It's a good basis.
The snare's pitch, or whatever note is playing with it, is out of key and it's ruining the track for me... ( 0:38 is the most noticeable part) Other than that, probably finish it lol.