I do love the crushed sound and idea. However i do agree with how your mixing does need improvement in a few areas. I will listen better when I get home with headphones so I may critique the mixing.
That beginning is really spinny, that does add a lot of flavour. But not gunna lie, around
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it sounds like a graveyard. I know somepeople enjoy that style but not for me. About from those parts, those clear sections of the song are nice and tangy. The
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mark could probably be reformed slightly to fit with the song. Its definitely more deep then the other song i listened to, so ill give you that to.
@Quanket
Thank you very much for listening to my song thoroughly and giving me an opinion with a lot of depth. Although, my music is dark and it has to be that way because that is what I want to imply, I also have this in mind but it is not for everyone. I appreciate the advice, thank you very much.
its unique, i like the atmosphere that you created but i feel like this was more of an experimental track than an actual track. thats just my thought but all in all its pretty cool!