I'd say turn the highs down on the ride-cymbal, and increase the highs a tad bit on your minatory sound design where as, it doesn't overpower so much. It's a really nice composition.
The introduction could be more suspenseful, imo. I would add more elements, use the Space synthesizer, it is very profresh. There's also a lot of low-mids distortion in the bass, I would swap some of that out, because too much will effect your mix, and not let your instruments breathe much but in reality, that be death though lol
the intro isnt rlly meant for suspense...its more just dark ambience...for me, i think having a drop happen suddenly only adds to the weight...and also, idk how much minatory you listen to, but the minatory bass i made is probably the closest to a non AT minatory bass youll hear. (IMO)