Idk if i mentioned this but i like intro, especially that weird bitcrushed pad in the begining
Omg i actually completed it!!!
LEtS GOOO
Pls show some love
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I really like the effort here. The sounds are pretty cliche but tearout seems to be really popular
01:44 that vocal sample was way too long before the drop. cut that sample literally down the middle and use the first half for the first drop and the second half the for the second drop.
Also idk what 01:52 is doing there, it should come after the part at 02:16 - 02:55 . literally switch those two parts of that song so that the part starting at 01:52 starts at the end of the 02:16 - 02:55 section.
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yeah giving it a second listen, I suppose you're right. There's no actual rules for the intro or anything, it's just a common thing you will notice about some songs. Of course the artist is always free to pursue their vision however they see fit. Please take all my advice with a grain of sand and remember it's all love <3
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I personally love long cinematic intros, so I don't think that the long intro is a bad thing, I just don't think it transitioned to the buildup very well imo
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Lastly, the intro to the song before the build is too long. Dubstep traditionally has the first drop occurring at or between 00:49 and 01:10 at the latest. this should give you a good 8-10 bars to make a nice simple intro and build which keeps listeners' ears engaged and keeps the pace of the track moving forward (after you take out 60 seconds, you only have about 1:30 - 2:00 left of a track, and this will be used up quickly especially when the draft starts getting legs)
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relistening to this, melody sounds familiar, cant really put my finger on it tho
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holy power. I do agree with virux but its has so much potential to become a mastpice
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open rmx pls
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DAMN
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not bad, just a few notes
-that glockenspiel in the intro may have an off key note, it sounds weird
-the buildup comes in out of nowhere and is really loud compared to the rest of the track
-sound design's pretty good, but it's based off of a sample so I can't really comment about much of that
-drop kind of reminds me of SWARM which is cool
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Ngl this also gives me deathstep vibes
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This is so fire
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gimme some of Loviators love
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Republished
Better master
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Republished
Oops i accidently muted everything xd so i fixed it
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I accidently muted everything imma republish it rn
