Some general critiquing: You don't really give it enough room to gain volume, so when it opens up, it's a little underwhelming and everything kinda gets lost. Don't be afraid to back off the volume, give it some room. As for the actual composition, the structure of the song is interesting, but your melody is a little meh. It doesn't feel like it's going anywhere. That might be a good place to practice in the future. Like the feel, keep producing!