4. Experiment more with airiness and delicate melodies! I listened to a few of your older tracks and you have a wonderful sense of ambience—open space I mean, not just the genre! Ambience is not limited to pads.. and I think you have the capability to making ambience out of little to nothing..!
I say this because I think you have a nice ear, and I think your synth improvement will further define your ambience!
1. Love the minimal qualities of this, a very nice melody that makes for lovely listening
2. Perhaps it is my bias, but I did not necessarily care for the detuning effect in this one...to me a detuned melody removes the ambient effect and makes it sound way more synthetic than it should be.
3. I love the percussion! But perhaps a cooler transition between the two completely different beats—they both have different vibes as to how I would "jam" to this ambient tune