I can see u used a bit of passion. thats how i make my songs. only when i get passion from something thats happend to me thats bad or good.summer gives me the good vibes
I like it! It just sounds the tiniest bit choppy. It would sound better to me if the sound, I think that a synth at(Not just there, just giving you idea of what the sound is)
0.37
and
0.26
, were smoother, and transitioned a little smoother. Overall though, amazing track!
thats actually some nice ideas going on! I like the drum beat and notes going on. My suggestions are focus on developing a more professional tone quality and dont have all the levels so loud