@Goon
i see you looking could you give some advice on what could be better? If you do so you will avoid being gnomed if not you will be gnomed you decide
If you're aiming for a lo-fi sound like your tag suggests, you could reel in the highs on the things with more high end, and it might help fill out the chords at
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if you put in a tiny wee bit of white noise