To add some crit, In my opinion I feel like abit of a muffled sounding rise up by using the frequency knobs and such to your advantage would really bring this bit together, so that you can take some of that silence out of the begining. Besides that, its gold. XD
i really like what youre going for with this! As HTR said theres a few mixing issues, and as naswalt said the drums sound a bit too artificial and plastic. Keep going though man youve definitely got room to grow into :)
I think you'd benefit greatly from studying a basic frequency chart, helps you learn which frequencies you should keep various instruments and sounds in :)
Not bad! I think it would sound even better if you panned the drums a little bit, and gave the snare some reverb. It would give it some atmospheric flavor
Lots of mixing issues in general on this one. I think I caught a few notes out of key scattered around the track, or you have sounds overlapping each other because you're release is too high. Either way, you should look up a quick tutorial on how to mix and master your track so you can get an idea of where you need to start practicing.