I'm not a big fan of the initial bass, but the arp that gets in at
0:10
is pretty cool, and I love the build up, glide and melodies are also pretty cool. Depending where you plan on going with this, it could be a really fun/groovy track
Actually Im relistening and I realise it's not the bassline itself, which is a pretty good cool classic trance bass. I think it's more about the drums: the snare seems unfit for the track, maybe it should be pitched up or its decay shortened. Anyways, I think if youd change the snare it would be better.