I'm sorry hun, but Rhianna is childhood for me. I always listened to her as a kid (and still do today! XD) This remix is a bop too! You've tracks are always really good! This is my second fav song by Rhianna by the way! Thanks for calling me to take a listen! <3
I like it but it is missing a few things. For One you need to make chords to match the vocals because rn all it sounds like is you were just focusing on the drop and not the full song itself. It has no balance. Because its EDM, your still going to have to make an upbeat rhythmic chord pattern to match the vocals and a melody. And then your also going to need a melody and a transition/buildup to lead into the drop. Hope this helps