Snare buildup too loud, should be lowered. Kick should be lowered. Better and not so sudden transitions, basses need more low-end because for some reason it's not hearable.
I can certainly hear some clipping in the beginning there, coming from the kick. It doesn't necessarily need that much power. Melodies are really nice. And sound design is really nice too, maybe some EQ on the mids of that bass/mid thing.