yo the lyrics aint bad. if u let me i can remix it and try sum too. i dont know bout ur drums here but its ur style so i aint hatin it. i think the drums are too loud tho and might need a lil more mixing and stuff. its good tho fasho👍
the problem of the contradiction could also be linked to the speakers or headphones or whatever audio device, as they have different ways of perceiving sound and stuff (therefore equalizers are different on every device)
It's pretty good, but in my opinion the vocals are not timed well with the music in certain places, unless it was done on purpose. It is definitely an interesting style, good job to both
it starts a little too wierdly maybe a volume automation that ends on the "are you ready" would be better and a distorted bass hitting each 1/4 note wouldve worked better than the current bass and a little more emphasis in the vocals, but i am not really one to talk about drum and bass or anything close to this style.
maybe, I mean I usually at least slightly dislike all my creations because I feel like I could do better, which is why I'm even asking people for all this feedback, because I want to know how I can improve