The melody in the beginning needs to be a little bit softer. The high notes are a bit loud. Also those chords at
0:27
are fucking amazing. Lead at
0:41
is a little bit loud, but apart from that the build is good. The sidechain on the 8th chords in the drop could be a bit shorter cause it takes away from the chords a bit. Second drop is good. The ending is a little abrupt though
it needs better mastering and you could like add some more effects or synhts or even vocal chops....but if u just did add some reverb and mastered this stuff this would be profesh af. (aswell goes for mixing)