stop with the loops. and actually make the music. if you want to learn more on how to do that, remix someone else's song and look at how they made it. try remixing my latest track because its all layered and easy to look at. if music is really what your trying to make, then actually try. don't just use loops, use the tools they give you.
thanks for the honesty I really appreciate that This is a track i published at a whim because i was messing around with different sounds and when it was done i wanted to see if people liked it or not I appreciate the honesty very much :)