Lyrics:

Thinkin bout the days when it wasnt right,

Dark roads ahead searching for the light.

Lost a couple friends to the life they chose,

Only thing i got left are the highs and lows.

Pain in my heart, i just hold it in,

Tryna keep my cool through the thick and thin.

Mama always prayed id stay on my grind,

Told me life gets hard, just give it time.

Slow down, yeah, im breathing deep,

Carryin weight but i still dont sleep.

Praying for peace but i got these scars,

Fightin for a dream that feels very far.

Seen the streets take the innocent too,

Kids grow up fast, thats only the truth

Pain dont heal, but we learn to cope,

Found a little strength when i lost some hope.

Life been rought but i keep my head,

Countin blessing when i go to bed.

Dreams got big, now im chasin more,

But i still remember who i do it for.

Slow down, yeah, im breathin deep,

Carryin weight but i still dont sleep.

Prayin for peace but i got these scars,

Fightin for a dream that feels so far.

One step closer every single day,

Working on myself, tryna find my way.

Hustle through the night till the sky turns blue,

Did it for my people, yeah, i stayed true

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  • actually good vocals niceeeee dude!

  • i see you did this in bandlab, correct? if so, lower the Classic to about 22%, and it will be better, and same with what hurakan said, let em ring. other than that, its not bad for a vocal song. when i make mine, i usually take 4 or 5 tries, idk how many passes you took, but its actually not bad. i like the mood a lot, i like this style of music and i would love to work with you in the future dude.

    Sincerely, Ben Erb

    • This was one take only

    • Thank you man

    • I hope you make more of this stuff. you might even make my charts.

  • bring the piano up a little bit

    i would also say that you should put a bit more stereo on the vocals so they're not occupying the same space as the kick (so they don't drown each other out)

    i don't really know anything about this genre so

    • Appreciate it, it was supposed to be a polo g vibe

    • otherwise this is great

  • i actually love your vocals

  • Great

  • vocals way too filtered

    let them ring out in the mix, not sit back idly

    • ofc

    • thanks

      ill check it out

    • ohh it was 2 loops the melody was called Blizzard_130_Bm_Lofi Piano and the drums were called Country Trap Drums 13

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  • nice

  • ay bro u wont eva lose me

    men cant even cope now of days

    one: beat amazing

    2 vocals if this is ur first time how da frick u aint nervoss or sum gng and too much autotune imo but other than that dude its amazing better than what i coud do

    • i aint og but ighh

    • Ight og appreciate the advice

    • also another thing just go for it worst that can happen is people not liking it ik im not one to talk but id just go for it next time

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  • Ayeee this is really good. Lokwey sounds kinda like Juice Wrld

  • collab?

  • it actually good

  • damn man me liken this

  • Bubba

    First time?

    Theres no way, i really liked it and im proud of how you've grown fr

    • Already sounds amazing bubba

    • This was only one take maybd if i had done multiple takes it would have sounded great

    • I appreciate it lowkey i started getting the hang of the flow better near the end

  • This is really good!

  • good job for singing for like the first time