i see you did this in bandlab, correct? if so, lower the Classic to about 22%, and it will be better, and same with what hurakan said, let em ring. other than that, its not bad for a vocal song. when i make mine, i usually take 4 or 5 tries, idk how many passes you took, but its actually not bad. i like the mood a lot, i like this style of music and i would love to work with you in the future dude.
i would also say that you should put a bit more stereo on the vocals so they're not occupying the same space as the kick (so they don't drown each other out)
2 vocals if this is ur first time how da frick u aint nervoss or sum gng and too much autotune imo but other than that dude its amazing better than what i coud do