im gon make a remix, js mixing the vox better, i can mix your vox for u if u want tell me if u like ;)
Prod by WINTER ( @WINTER )
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This is just a taste of whats to come!!!!
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this was fr like the first beat i made :0
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Sounds good
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Bro your 15 dang
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I gotchu foo
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14? sheeeeshhh
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(cont.) cuz when you speed up the flow but then you go mono, it just has this da-da-da-da-da sound and people kinda get lost there. definitely make it sound more like a story than just trying to fit all the words into the song. feel your lyrics and then translate your feeling through the mic. thats when your unique sound best comes out and you will find that your crowd tends to be more pleased (thats just a bonus dont do it for the people's likes that never ends well)
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ok feedback:
right now your music is like searching for needles in a haystack. you have a handful of hot bars, and the rest is more of like filler stuff thats decent. also, definitely keep working on your sound-your pronunciation of words is important as well as the tone of your voice. when you go hard, people should know. when youre chillin, people should know. try different inflections in your voice to make your raps sound slightly more conversational instead of just straight, monotone
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this is like some half-asleep homeless person rapping over some generic ass beat.
you're young so theres definitely gonna be some improvement but ight
also, where did those adlibs come from
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can i at least put it on youtube ? i dont make any money off youtube
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if i do a remix can i put it on all platforms, and is the flute sample free for profit or royality free
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FIRE, PLZ BRUH SEND ME THE VOCALS IM A 12 YEAR OLD PRODUCER
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sick
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the Ad libs go a bit crazy might wanna work on the timing but this is sick bro keep up the good work
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@ApoC told ya so ;)
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yea man ik and honestly ive been putting my heart out ik it doesnt sound like it by the delivery but just wait till you hear whats in stock
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If you have to, I would tap the metronome and put ur heart into rapping it like you mean it, just don't be too forceful lol @MOOSEY ♪ eq'ing is important too
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Is that you the vocal . Its cool
