Good start, the song could be longer with more notes and a middle part, that is different from the first part, use echo note or space, or robotic note. use presets. end with the original song. Try to make a remix, and see how many likes you might get. If you decide a remix send it and I will let you know what I think.
This song has potential to be great, make it longer. repeat the middle drum and bass. Add some robotic notes and maybe some echo notes. use some low notes and high to break up the repeating beat. use the fast drum part at the end. Just a thought.
I like the idea of it though for the drums i would have broken up a dnb drum pattern and rearranged it to make a new pattern from it instead of using a funky drum preset.