I like this! The sower notes sort of sound like a guitar, but there is a few things I would change. The vocals at 0:35 ruins the mood. I understand how it's part of the song so just make it fade in I say. and at 0:47 the I feel like you should've made the synth fade away, fading is good.. Makes the song feel incomplete. Every other vocal fade in/away. Just fade thing. Fading is good.