wow, havent checked out your music in a while! i dont think its too cheesy...its actually pretty cool! i love the chords you use, too; very unique! the only things i dont really like are the guitar synth and the saw lead. its just me though...im not really a 80s music person. but this really is awesome! yes, i do think it needs work, but its still awesome. wonderful work! :)
really all this is missing is an 80's girl singer singing about love or something :P. this is soo 80's its not even funny. this is quite professional though! it sounds like ive heard it before. really great song my friend!!