very great track, love the vocals :) emotional expresive mood, love it
Loved the piano and the feel of this song and had a bunch of ideas listening to this. So I wrote some lyrics pretty fast for it. This is a beautiful song put together by Julsy.
-shortened, took out synths, changed drums, changed harp, added vocals, edited the piano taking out noise.
Lyrics:
Where were you taking me? All these memories I can't control. We used to wonder where we would end up,when we would fall. Do you remember how it used to be? A couple of careless kids, they called us hooligans on those streets. We were so reckless, Do you remember looking up? Do you remember how it felt? Do you remember my heart beating?
Where did you go? How could you just leave me here all alone? I can't hold on anymore. I'm shaking, biting on these words. I can't feel anything, anymore.
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Very Kool
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Thank you tornsage (:
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beauty prose - mysterious feel love it :)
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Thanks Msm!
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intense, good stuff :)
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Thank you @Crazy about You !! I put a lot of emotion in this one. I'm glad you see that (:
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I really like this ''We used to wonder where we would end up,when we would fall.'' that is an amazing phrase, still singing dude I want to listen more :)
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Now it sounds amazing better dude, I really like your vocals, your voice is hard and your lyrics are so deep! GREAT :D Refav
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Republished
Turned down the drums and background vocals.
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I agree w/ Crazy
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Thank you! I was waiting for someone to say something about my vocals haha. So I should turn down the drums?
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I think that your vocals are great but you could put down a little the sound of the beat your voice can sound better :)
