which doesn't sound really good but if it's artistic and on purpose it's ok. When you do LoFi you want to paint an image, but not too vivid because it's meant to be a chill song played in the background. Hard bass can ruin that and too much repetition can result in the picture being too bland or monochromatic. Also I noticed there is rain sound effects after the beach sound effects which doesn't make a lot of sense, so you can transition or use one or the other to improve. Otherwise great work!
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The start is nice but we can hear the sample end before it completely vanishes, and it would be nice if it continued quietly throughout the track. The bass is very very dark and the melody unsynchronizes too often which isn't pleasant for the ear. The sections in between the drum are plane and repetitive, consider making them shorter or adding SFX or adding an instrument. Otherwise, great work! The ending is really nice, when the piano comes back from the low pass but the piano cuts off suddenly
