WOW! im loving this! yes to what Daftwill said, it could use more variety and the drums arent the best quality...maybe try to find a different sample or something idk. i love the use of the detroit bass here, very very cool! keep working, you have potential! amazing work and welcome to AT! :)
you post it on my wall so i'll give you my opinion : i find your track poor into drums, not very variated, mainly in the beginning, at
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i find it very good but just for 20s after still the same to the beginning, you really should expand this middle part.