theres a lot of sub/lowend going on, the kick and snare in the intro could be better, (not just bland stock samples, beef em up!) the ideas are all there, just gotta learn to make better sound design, and transition things better and mix/master it all! ur getting there tho!
It's like synthpop mixed with 8 bit retro music, but with a soft glowy vibe. This is a very interesting composition. I also like the use of different noises for the drums in that break. Very cool.