you asked for crit, so imma be brutally honest...this is stuff i'm not too keen on just because there's not much to it like it's a single sample stretched out for one minute with a rass effect and it just repeats, it feels almost dry and what i'd suggest is not relying to heavily on many samples instead focus on shifting to using more synths and other tools to get a more authentic feel...and since you did ask for crit this is all this is i'm not arguing just stating my opinion