if you're gonna remix it then change the genre or something. all you did was add some distorted explosion or something, (for the first half). i think that that weird wobble you made was kinda cool :P and also the rise before the drop was kinda cool :P that drill siren sound. but yeah. the intro and most of it is just.. bleh :( sorry to say bro. but yeah. i hope this comment doesnt upset you :P