thanks man this was actually made for a mash-up between me and friend of mine. We're mixing the two together as a collab thing. Check out my soundcloud so you can hear my other stuff (with proper names). I really appreciate the critiscism, I dont want people to say it has no flaws because then they're lying. Repetitiveness is my main issue right now, I'm working on it :)
its really good but got kind of repetitive. i can soooo see you going somewhere with music tho! a small suggestion/opinion. (not trying to be rude or anything) don't loop the chorus too much and keep the audience wondering like "woah what the hell?! thats a sick twist!" not like "oh man this gets repetitive." trust me it happens a lot. but other than that, it was good and soothing to the ears.