Cover of track fervor by pen.
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fervor

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i gave her some flowers one day

a couple of weeks passed, and i soon gave her my heart

we spent time lost in our own world where nobody could touch us

then the flowers perished, and the love followed soon after

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    yito ☮

    This was practically my introduction to AT.

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    it's also embr

    mM

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      pen.

      lol throwback to when i could write half decent chords

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    Sub4sax

    Why does she have cum on her face? :D

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    Kibbey

    the chords, ahhhhhhhhhh, them tears, AHHHHHHHHHH

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    ollie

    This is amazing dude, big fan of that intro! Great chords

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      pen.

      thanks a lot, i really enjoyed working on this draft so i'm happy ya like it

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    kinnikinnik

    sounds professional as heck

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    leadenshrew

    damn

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    pen.

    Republished

    minor edits

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    acloudyskye

    yo stereo that white noise

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    acloudyskye

    oh wow

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    pen.

    WOO IT WORKED

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    pen.

    Republished

    okay so maybe this time the whole track will actually publish

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    owtlet

    silence at end on purpose? anyhow, woahhh

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    Velocistar

    Love the intro. Like, LOVE it. Nothing needs to change there. I, however, feel that the chords, and lead are a tad bit harsh on the high frequencies in the drop/melodic part/whatever you want to call it, I don't care.

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      Velocistar

      All good :P Shit happens

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      pen.

      duly noted, ty

      for now i'm just gonna try and get the whole thing to pub kek then i can make the changes

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    Limauru

    1:30 ugh your chords are always so freshhh ughhhhhguughghghghgh

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      pen.

      but thx i try :*

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      pen.

      AURA STAHP THIS DRAFT IS MESSED UP I NEED TO REPUB