I like this feel, but I think that those 8 bit sounds in the back, could be a little louder. Also a fat bass line would really pull it all together. Look at how thin your waveform is! Let's fatten that up with just a few little details :)
i liek - the bass drum is amazing lol. I feel like a pad to fill in towards the middle would be kool, make the song a bit more dynamic. Im probably gonna find the time to remix this too haha