Song is pretty good! Its just the structure that needs to be worked on. The melody is too repetitive, so youre gonna need to do a few changes, add in variations of the melody and stuff like that. Overall, i like it. Keep it up!
I think the main synth's attack is a little too long. The chord structure sounds pretty good and the drums aren't too bad, i think if you vary them up more and make them more prominent the sound will be less cluttered