i think the synth from the beginning doesn't fit the track. not as organic sounding as the rest of the synths, and maybe a little out of tune. I love everything underneath. it's truly a great track in there :)
Uff now this on is great.I love that melancholic atmos sound at the first part of the track, and maybe You could make it appears in other part.However it is a great tune that deserves to be submited to contest ;)