Not as good as the last one, but It's ok I guess..

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  • The hats sound like trap hats.

    • its a loop i made called "Trap Hat Loop" so yeah

  • hmmm man doing this kind of thing is really unhealthy for creativity.

    looking at refract, the instrumentation is exactly the same, percussion is extremely similar, structure is identical (can't believe you did the whole dnb beat thing in section 2 again) and it's obvious you didn't make any effort to come up with any new ideas at all.

    I could never lose appreciation for a track based on its genre, but I can't discourage this kind of self-plagiarism any stronger. trust me, don't do it man

    • fair enough, will remember for the future :D

    • never force yourself to create. its ok to admit that a draft or idea just isn't going to work and start over

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  • why is my shitty song one of the similar tracks?

  • i mean everyone else said its way too similar the last one wasn't very original to begin with ive got the same crit from the last one you need to work on transitions and learn how to set up a drop for the biggest possible impact

    • i agree, i'm working on this. I have tried to make the Third/Last track in the EP and deleted the whole thing and started again over 5 times

  • its rlly good dont rlly have any crit

  • You have a lot of talent, use it to come up with new things no one's ever heard before. Doing that will definitely boost your creativity and motivation.

  • It is a great track, but like all the comments before it is way too similar to Refract. In general this track feels a bit more muddy than refract; the kick and general low end could be a bit more defined than it is. @opaqity made a great point btw, get out of your comfort zone, experiment with new genres. You can even forget about genres and come up with your own sound, just make sure not to copy and paste tracks like you did here.

    • very good point dude. i mean i love Auxilor and all, but.

  • too similar to the last one and the chords feel really weak even though they drown everything else out. however i think the chord prog is nice :)

    • I agree, It wasn't very good and not much effort but whatevs

  • almost the exact same track as the other one. really disappointed, you can do way better.

  • Republished

    ok

  • Republished

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