The sound is good!
However it sounds as if he were listening to small pieces of different tracks. That is, there is no continuity or fluidity sesación nor a central idea on the track. Maybe that's one of the things you can work on your next track.This is very normal when you are starting from AT. You could not agree with me and well, but this feedback is raised with love and respect for your work.
Feel free to delete it once you read ;)
Have a nice day!
