not bad, not too at all friend! this could've been mixed a little better with the bass and the melody but overall, I dig it. Good stuff! Don't stop doing ya thang man!
pretty vibe, but there are some things you could do a little better. i would turn up the bass to help the track feel more full, because it feels like its mostly high end throughout the song. i would also put some fx on the drums, (maybe a crusher?), and turn them down a bit because they kind of overpower that main lead. i would also add some bass notes to the lead and maybe some reverb as well to really help bring that part out as well. its a really good start tho, good job :)
yea no prob, i dont do lofi much myself, so im just going based off of what i think would sound good, but if you want someone who really knows the genre, i'd hit up Roy